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You hold my heart in your hand

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        you hold my hands   you make me feel

          tightly  together   completely  safe

             warmly packed secure always

               and friendly and homely

                 don't let my hand go

                     back into dark

                        I love you

                         guardian

                           angel
This is my first ever concrete poem. Hope you enjoy!! This took forever!! Bored :squee: :mashedpotato: Rainbow Emote Rave 
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akrasiel's avatar
Very sweet :aww:

I'm not sure 'homely' is the word you want, though. When applied to a person, it usually means plain or unattractive.